Comparison

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Everyday, we see new people.  Many people may seem similiar by physical features, but people are different in there own ways.  Some people may talk the same and enjoy doing the same things as another person, but there is always something special about someone.  I have found out about the differences and similarities about my two friends Pathya H.  and Darian C. 

In my eyes of course i see the obvious that they are both girls and they attend Untalan Middle School.  What I have done is found out things that make them different from eachother that wouldnt be known unless you get to know them.   Pathya and Darian, are both girls, However they enjoy doing things diffrently.  I have found out that Pathyas favorite place to be is outside of school.  As for Darian, her favorite place to be is in school Although, Pathyas favorite subject is social studies, Darians favorite subject is math.  Because they may both appeal to be girls , they have added what they think is there best physical feature.  Darian says that she thinks her best physical feature would have to be her smile, on the other hand, Pathya thinks that her best physical feature is her curly hair, added to what makes them diffrent is if Darian could go anywhere in this world she would chose to visit Europe.  As for Pathya she would liketo visit Hawaii because she wants to visit the beaches and learn how to surf. 

As it has been mentioned above, they are diffrent in many ways.  Now, I am going to describe ways in which  Pathya and Darian are similiar.  One of te biggest things that makes them similiar would be the person who inspires them the most.  Pathya say that she is inspired by her dad, because hes always for her.  Also, Darian says that her dad inspires her the most, for the same reason.  The similiar physical feature tat Pathya and Darian is that they both have dark brown eyes.  Another obvious similarity would be they both attend Untalan Middle School and are representatives of 8A lions. Mostly, everyone enjoys playing sports, as for Pathya and Darian they both enjoy playing VolleyBall.  The last thing that I’ve found out makes them alike is Pathya would rather be at the beach,  likewise Darian would prefer beach over a pool.  

In my eyes, Darian and Pathya are people i consider friends.  That being said,  I thought without asking them,  I would know what makes them diffrent and similiar I choose not to mention all the obvious, and get to know the inside of them, and what makes them unique.  All the things I found out makes them diffrent from eachother, are things that set them apart from everybody.  They each have they’re own way of seeing things from diffrent point of views.  Also they have certain opinions about certain thing.  Things that i found out make them alike are things that are pretty intresting.  What intrested me, in ways they’re alike, is how they’re dads inspire them the most, well after talking to them, and getting to know them more, I’ve realized that many people are unique and special in they’re own way.  Accepting people for their flaws and strengths is what makes you a great person yourself, and what makes you special.

Journal Entry #20

  Evaluate your classmates’ presentation. Describe what makes an excellent presentation. Use Examples (2 paragraphs)

   An excellent presentation must consist of two main things. One is an excellent speaker. An excellent speaker is a person with a loud voice, acts as if they know what there talking about, or in other words not showing if or not nervous. Another thing that provides an excellent presentation is whatever is being presented is clear, and able to understood. Without a good speaker, with a loud clear voice, it would be hard for the listeners to understand, or hear what is being taught or showed. Also, another thing that would help with an excellent presentation would be to keep your listeners interested in what you are presenting. In other words, dont make your presentation to long, or talk about things that you know wouldn’t interest your listeners, and are not important information to know.

  In my classmates’ presentation I was observing the volume of their voice, and the way they presented their powerpoint. Some students like Alana and Taylor had a really good presentation. They both required alot of useful information, and had a good, loud, clear voice. Some students presentation like Vannalyn, had good information as seen in her powerpoint, but while presenting it to the class, she seemed a little nervous, and some of us in the back of the class didn’t hear some things she was trying to add to her presentation. Overall, all the students that presented their powerpoint provided good information, and interesting pictures.